Hey
Really glad to get into this forum
It’s what I am looking for.
Hope to know more member here.
Nice try dude, but you should really be hanging out in here:
viewtopic.php?f=72&t=3725&start=0&hilit=haiku
ps.- you want the syllables to go like 5/7/5… you’re totally almost there. 
I’m starting to agree.
and so it is done 