No matter what happened before, the day seemed to really start when me and Newcombe got dropped off at the river for a whole afternoon of rope swinging rapid drifting river swimming good times with all kinds of good folks with the same attitude. Wes and Breven were a few hours late picking us up but who even cares? It was the right place to be stuck for an afternoon and who needs them anyway. They were in their own weird world up at the house that whole week while me and Newcombe were in ours down at the camper. The afternoon of space probably saved the tension just enough for the night ahead. And they brought us burritos to make up for being late, and that
oh my.
i’ll give this a shot in a little while.
“Nothing else existed except for everything.”
Perfection Brady, sweet perfection.
You did this from memory? How soon after?
It’s really very well done, but like CJ, the lack of paragraphs discourages your audience, and I think it’s good that people should read this account especially if they’re ever considering doing this. Then again, the experience happens as if there are no paragraphs to logically organize conceptual events, so maybe you should leave it the way it is.
In any case, thanks for sharing.
Now someone puddle the man and let hime write another one!!!
Jk, very captivating read Brady, liked it a lot.
What ever happened to your novel you were writing?
YES! I told you that shit was great. Great story Brady. I always loved your paragraph-less ramblings.
I always loved the astronomy chart connect-the-dot trips too. That shit can’t be beat. Especially with a good, omnicient moon filling your finally-got-it head with it’s electric light.
Gadddd, I love LSD. Sucks about your buddy losing it. I’ve been there too.
Hitch your scrotum to a shooting star.
Next Wanee, it’s fucking ON!
-i did it from memory about a month afterwards, but i wrote it in the camper at night listening to a lot of the same music.
-I actually DID go back and seperate this one into paragraphs but the indentions were lost in the message board format. Perhaps i will go back and put a space between all the paragraphs.
Thanks to those of you who read it.
i finished it a couple years ago and haven’t done anything with it.
I am supposed to do some work shopping and revising with someone this winter when i go back to Florida but for right now, I am in Los Angeles for the week enjoying what’s left of summer.
^Right on Brady!
Enjoy the sunshine!!
^thanks man!
i was hoping this would resurface here. It’s quickly become one of my favorite (and most popular) works.